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Monday 11 March 2013

Juicy Big White Shark poem


The Big White Shark

A big white shark is fast and furious, it can eat anything.

Crab, shrimp, fish, and even huge squids.

It lives in the ocean, sometimes swims up to the beach,

and make us frightened and scared.

It is the big boss of the sea, it swims as fast as anything.

If you are its prey it will swim around you in circles 

you are sure to have a quick heartbeat.

But it is also noticeable, by its dorsal fin.

If you saw something like a grey triangle poking out of the water,

be sure to yell and ran away because it is the Big White Shark!

2 comments:

  1. I like your line that says "It is the big boss of the sea".

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  2. HI Mengchun.

    That poem of yours sounds really strong and powerful !
    can't wait to hear the next one bye Mengchun.

    By Savannah

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