Connective

Nana and Poppa lived in the countryside, but Nana disliked living in the countryside. One day, she and Poppa headed over to visit us in the city. Later, she didn’t want to return home after she came to our house. Poppa had to go home alone, and fetch her the next day. Poppa chatted to mum and they decided to let nana stay in the city. Soon, they sold their old countryside house and came to live with us. It took very long to settle in, but it was worth it. I was really glad that they came to live with us.

We worked in a group to make the short story sound better. We added time connectives, descriptive words, and replaced boring words with interesting words to it more fascinating.